inspirado

There's still one scene that just doesn't work and I can't think of anything to either fix it or replace it with.

I tried a variation of the famous Texas Chainsaw 'dinner' scene but with the blood going in instead of out - but it just seemed to obvious. Then I changed it to a Boogie Nights style drug deal scenario...and that was so much worse. Oh so much worse.
At the moment it's reverted back to a stripped down version of TCM again.

It's the only real sticking point in the script and is no coincidence that it kinda has to be a dialogue scene. Talk is hard to come up with...Maybe that's what I've got to do then: make the entire scene silent.... oh hang on...I'm on to something here... see you in a bit when I've finished the scene.